Review incomiiiiiing!
The Good:
-I like the ideas you have in this. They're very well-done.
-This could definitely fit in a game, very easily.
-Mixing is fine, though that shouldn't have been *too* difficult.
The Not-So-Good:
-I'm sure you know this, but the instrument quality isn't all that good.
-Oh, come on. You just repeat the entire thing twice? That's lazy, man. :( Try putting more effort into the composition so that it doesn't just repeat, but is a full song. Failing that, at least use Audacity or something to re-export it as a loop and label it as such.
Overall: Not much I can really say about this without getting nitpicky. It sounds nice, the instrument quality could be better, the mixing is fine, and there could be more compositional effort. Otherwise, good job.
-RRC-
-SkyeWintrest-