My Prescription: I dig the intro build up, very professional. A little bit long though, I would have started the main synth at about :30. The beats you drop in @ :45 could use a little work, the base has an alright kick, but that secondary synth shouldn't have it's own introduction, rather be introduced with the main synth at the 1 minute mark. The beat gets a bit repetitive, so try to give the lead synth some elaborations. I don't like the build up at 1:17, the drums could use some work and overall it was too slow. However I liked that instrument you introduced at 1:40, interesting flavor to it. I think the overall issue with this song is the repetitive beats in lead synths, especially in the second part of the song around the 3 min mark. Sounds just like you copy and pasted the first half and dropped in a high hat. Rather than drag the song on longer than it needs to be, make it more succinct and add everything you want (Such as the high-hats) before resorting to a copy and paste.