hey just dropped by, i came from ralaiyx3's Bastion remix and thought your review was pretty good,
that said, i expected to hear a great tune at the least lol. but i was mistaken, and maybe i put my expectations a bit to high. forgive me for that.
to the review/my thoughts;
ive given it a listen, maybe 2 or 3 more listens.
make it 4. and ive come to the conclusion that the overall volume is pretty low. why?
the builds and 'drops' as far as you can call it drops are good. quality-wise it lacks the clearness and/or crispiness. the song seems stuffed with lots of noise (noise from the instruments) which makes it seem like its a filled song with lots of potential. im not saying this hasnt potential at al okay.
it has potential. but not enough in this 'state'
consider splitting some of the instruments and put it in different 'registers' to get an even balance of actual sound and noise if you follow me.
that said, i do not think this song is bad.
2 months of work is pretty long for what came to the surface.
word of small advice; keep it simple and true.
also i took a listen to your DnB song before this one and it has WAAAYYY more body.
did you do something different to make 'Final Chorus' ?
5 stars for you!!!!
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