I was a little skeptical at the start of the song but I eased into it. The electronics add a great deal to this piece! I think you should have gone heavier with it near the end and just pushed up the speed of the piece but I just say that because I do that with all my songs haha. Good job.
thanks I usually do bring it crazy up but I just couldn't find anything that would work, I worked with the movie Pacific Rim as a musical Trailer refrence, so thats really how it turned out was trailer music XD