I really digg this song. If your anti-singing (Like myself) whack in a little distortion. Makes singing a little easier. Gave you a 5/5 because the songs structure is pretty dam good, yeah quality if off a bit but I use fruity loops as well and yeah, finicky as hell at times.
Your morphvox settings are strange, I mean I could still tell it was a male, running in morphvox. After running the voice doctor make some more changes, their 'doctor' wizard isn't that accurate.
Lyrics ... 10/10, I'm not a poet but I found humour in the song.
Clipping is an issue, use compressors if your not sure.
Thanks mate! Since I've never tried adding lyrics to a song before this I went head first into it so there are a couple phrases I have no clue of what they mean lol. You and Cabbster have said there's quite a bit of clipping, what's clipping exactly? As for compressors I wouldn't know where to find them, I follow the visual appearance of any features I use and I don't really look at what things are called by name lol. I should try to change that habit and fast.
All in all I've decided to do a remastered version of Until The Day We Die over the next few days and I'm definitely going to make some improvements from the feedback I'm getting so far from Newgrounds and the other sites I upload to.
Again, thanks for the feedback, that goes to everyone. It helps tremendously! =D
I've just finished remastering the song, I'm uploading it now. =) Thanks a whole bunch mate, you saved my music! Literally lol. It probably would've taken me like 5 songs before I found out about compressors for myself.