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Breath of Air [Remastered

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Author Comments

I mostly chose to remaster this because of the NGADM '13, but it's also been on my list for a while so I thought, why not now?

Original for comparison: http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/498566

In case anyone was wondering:
-FL Studio 11
-Edirol Orchestral (Piano & Timpani)
-Sonatina Symphonic Orchestra (All Strings, Horns, Flute, Glock)
-Various Soundfonts (everything else)


Hi papkeeeeeeeeeee.

The Good:
-Very cute, emotional song. The basic ideas are very good.
-I love the echoing piano in the background, it's very nice.
-There's your normal woodblock sound. Heh.
-The break at about 0:51-0:57 is VERY well-done. Kudos to you. :D

The Not-So-Good:
-There's a bit of a pitter-pattering in the background for the piano. It sounds like a soundfont sound which isn't really that good.
-The overall mixing is still a tad bit muddy in the mids.
-What is with the ending, why would you end it in such an awkward way. Why why why why why. ;_;
-The glockenspiel or chime or whatever doesn't sound very good, still seems like a soundfont.
-Try using a second theme along with your main theme as well.

Overall: Decent composition, decent mixing, generally decent instruments, it's pretty good. I like it. Definitely wouldn't call it a song that should have a score of approximately 3.5. Here's hoping more people will realize that you're actually a very good and talented musician!


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papkee responds:


Thanks, that clicking is actually a separate instrument, but I guess it's not distinct enough. All the soundfont-ish sounds are actually soundfonts, and I'm not too happy about the ending either.

The original is better in my opinion.

Wow, this was really good.
The usage of instruments were spot on and the melody sounded very good.
I think that those heavy drums made it even better.
It got a tiny bit repetitive at the end though, but the overall song sounded so great. It's barely noticeable.

Good job.

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Fucking haters. That's a very low score for a good song.

papkee responds:

It's probably because I forgot the end bracket in the title.

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Credits & Info


3.71 / 5.00

Jun 15, 2013
11:22 AM EDT
File Info
8.9 MB
3 min 53 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.