-Very cute, emotional song. The basic ideas are very good.
-I love the echoing piano in the background, it's very nice.
-There's your normal woodblock sound. Heh.
-The break at about 0:51-0:57 is VERY well-done. Kudos to you. :D
-There's a bit of a pitter-pattering in the background for the piano. It sounds like a soundfont sound which isn't really that good.
-The overall mixing is still a tad bit muddy in the mids.
-What is with the ending, why would you end it in such an awkward way. Why why why why why. ;_;
-The glockenspiel or chime or whatever doesn't sound very good, still seems like a soundfont.
-Try using a second theme along with your main theme as well.
Overall: Decent composition, decent mixing, generally decent instruments, it's pretty good. I like it. Definitely wouldn't call it a song that should have a score of approximately 3.5. Here's hoping more people will realize that you're actually a very good and talented musician!