You really went into writing an interesting story :) I can tell you really put forth effort and imagination into this piece, big props to the wind sound effect complimenting the picture, really brings it to life beautifully. It feels like a part of an RPG, I could easily see this in a game. The transitions in this piece are lovely. Really dynamic and mood changing, and tells a story. Reminds me of some Final Fantasy games. My only complaint is that is clips at points, but other than that, you have an amazing piece full of variation. It's a shame about the clipping, but it's still a wonderful piece.