Was ok the first time around...
A lot better this time.
P.S. your voice is not that bad, not like mine anyway.
Thanks. Maybe everyone hates their own voice.
I love this so much and wanted to hear the lyrics so bad, I was this close o do a cover of it, myself! :D I'm glad you posted this; I didn't know people had asked you to do so, but I can see why..since I secretly thought the same :p I can hear the lyrics clearly, and you have a good voice...definitely suits the instruments you used, as well. The effects you put it on it were great, still conveying that monochromatic sense !
Um... nice title by the way :D Yes it is certainly comprehensible now. So, good job! ^_____^
Thank you. You've mentioned you wanted to hear the lyrics. So did a lot of other people. Finally I succumbed. It wasn't much use writing lyrics when no one can hear them. You can still do a cover thought. Make it very different.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.