you did well at the buildup practice,.. however well means im giving you a 6.5 out of 10 for the builds.
its not really modern trance of today now is it? and uplifting.. i dont feel very lifted .. more relaxed and chilled.
it sounds like it could be used in a racing game! -but thats just me remembering some old racing game tunes ;p
anyways keep working on those builds and sound design!