Nice

Wow I have to say that was some beautiful sound and you really let it lose with a deep and dark sound and it all comes together with some quality of sound love your energy and vibe on this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
make more like this

~X~

the bass is pretty deep.... normally i like them deep but i think you overdid it.
try putting some distortion on it (just a LITTLE BIT) and boost its volume.
also your pluck would probably sound better if you stereo-ize it or widen it lol either way would sound more epic ;) it sounds like nexus btw... i could be terribly wrong tho.

and if you are on the road-to making this better why not add more percs/hats/sounds n stuff
make it full.

I like the ominous mood at the beginning and the transition with the crash at :16. It's climactic and has some cool instruments. I wish there was a little more substance, though, especially towards the first half. Still, it's really catchy and smooth-flowing and well-structured. The ending wasn't that interesting for me, though. Still, overall, a solid track. ;)