good start

i know this review is 4 years late, but you can still construct this into a song
cause is really nice, especially how the voices go in melody
use this track and make sumthin out of it :P
wew
-Mugle approved-

Very nice

Constructive criticism:
- Add variety. Have two or three sections, with different chords sequences (in the same key, of course), and alternate between them.
- Make it a song. Add some lyrics, or at least a melody. This would sound great with a main voice singing the lead melody, and those harmonies adding emphasis

Nice guitar work, though. I think you could make something really classy if you put your mind to it