Sound: There are mixing issues abound here, along with quite few things you can do to expand your sound and make it sound more epic.
Composition: The composition style is pretty straightforward, yet that also makes it slightly repetitive. Percussion needs major work as right now it's pretty flat and sounds like a machine drumming and not... live. The build to the end is weak unfortunately and needs work.
Fit to Art: The track fits decently well, although I think it lacks a general battle drive to it. Then again, the art doesn't depict the battle, so it's alright.
Originality: Nothing new here.