I don't like that grating clicking noise throughout the track, otherwise it's not too bad.
I think the main melody sounds really good and fits well with the title, but it would be nice with some more variation in it too. Still very good though.
Also it seems kinda wierd that you have 140 views and 70 ratings and still land on a rating of 2.xx. That seems totally strange for me o__O
Keep it up man!
I'm not sure what happened or what's still happening, clearly. But I a MASSIVE amount of 0's within just a few minutes of uploading. Since then it's slowed down. I'm still getting a whole bunch of votes from I guess randoms (even though the traffic seems a little to high for nomal) That are voting and giving better ratings? This song's trashed though.
The song ends rather abruptly. If this was intended to be a loop you should have set it as a loop, which it seems to loop just fine. The beat is very generic but works to your song. I found the.. "grinding hollow tube" noise a little annoying though. I think you should have been a little more creative with the guitar track, I liked the two repeating appregios, but a little more substance would have been nice, that or another track that had a melody to it.
How I usually look at loops is how long I can listen to it before I get bored. Writing the review up to this point has become a matter of tolerating it, Not usually a good sign. But there is definitely potential. I read on your page that you are new to this, so don't be discouraged! Keep trying, work hard on your music, and you will see improvements and success in your work.
All the best,
I hope this isn't it? This sounds pretty good, minus the clicky drums sounds on the ears before the kick hits- those make it sound somewhat messy, and are definitely too loud, in my opinion.
I really do like your melody though, and this is a great song idea! Mark it as a WIP next time because it definitely doesn't sound finished- if you do finish it, I'd love to hear it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.