MDJ V1 - First thing I noticed is you sound really good on this beat, the second thing I noticed was a copious amount of name disses. Overall this verse was pretty simple.
FatBeats V1 - Starting off the rhyme scheme with dysentery is impressive as fuck. Grooming tips line made me laugh. A fistful of nice personals here.
MDJ V2 - I wish I knew what Fats looked like because I think the Goonies line could have been good. You made a big mistake coming more long-winded than your first verse when that's something Fats attacked you for.
FatBeats V2 - We're well aware is a great way to start the verse. I like how you flip the British diss once before announcing you're going to beat him with filler, then proceeding to knock him out with some strong imagery.
Fats for the win, definitely.
I give it to fats. but stop doubling so many bars, it just sounds muddled and disjointed especially with a accent ( of any-kind ). you'd sound much doper with no ad-libs at all to add emphasis to the content and less to the "delivery."
Gotta hand this one to MDJ! He did his thing on it and murdered it! Very good Round 1 battle too!
I gotta give this one to Mark. I thought his direct shots and straight forwards disses shined. Fats had some awesome verses but it felt like he didn't really have any wow disses. Dope battle gents.
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