Wow! This version sounds great indeed! I don't know, there's nothing to pick on, unless... I wouldn't use staccato on every note, not for the sake of the feeling you want to achieve. Sometimes just a little legato on flutes would do the trick and pinpoint the strings' pizzicato. Just a little thing but it's just my perception! Want moar orchestral piecez from ya, mate!
Cheers, Sir. Will do XD
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