sounds like one your other songs, darkness after. but not that much. it's still its own song.
it sounds sorta like painkiller music, i can turn my volume to max, close my eyes, and watch the undead fall one by one...
You missed a note.
Listen to Pantera's Primal Concrete Sledge, and the main riff, where Dimebag is just hitting open palm muted notes, listen to that, something like that would fit in AMAZING right at 14 or 16 seconds. Try it out.
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