You discovered a sound? Is that a particular sample? I would have brought the synth at :53 in just a bit earlier I liked that. How about mixing in some bassy triads for enhanced precussion? Similar to the ones at 1:37? I am craving a lead synth to be giving me an angsty riveting melody over this beat. Maybe a vocal/audio sample at the end to create a feeling of closure? I like the build I think you did this very nicely. It's missing a crash. It peaks and then quickly comes down. I end up feeling let down. It may sound cooler to you to if you tried emphasizing the focal point. I enjoy how you kept this material under 3:00. That can be difficult to do with technoesque songs. I would trip it up and add in some accents to give a feeling of conflict precedting closure. Right now it is ultimately stagnant. Good start though, good vibes 8)
Thank you for the the insightful review. I'm a bit of a rusher and sometimes I finish projects too quickly. I always listen afterwards and think,"Oh..." but by that time I'm already onto another project. Gotta keep the flow. Thanks again.
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