It's pretty rad, but there are some bits where it just doesn't sound right. Overall, I enjoyed listening to it.
IF ONLY I KNEW WHY THEY DONT SOUND RIGHT
This almost sounds like you made it on old FL. Anyway, yeah mixing is a bit weird on this one. It might have to do with the bass. and 1:17 you had too much mids and way too much delay on that build up.
I love the breakbeat tho. Kind of adds some expressions to the groovy feel this is suppose to have. And as usual....your melodies are ALWAYS better than mines.
So yeah that's all i can point out so far. Great job tho!
Lol yeah the build up is pretty messed up.
IDK what is wrong with the mixing other than it's wrong. Kinda drives me crazy.
The reason I submitted this one is mostly because I was sitting on three different songs that were almost done. That's too many. :P Only way to improve is to keep submitting and work through the bad... somehow... blah
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.