Awesome loop. I really like the atmosphere it creates. Would it be alright if I used this in a game I'm making for one of my classes? I would give you full credit for the music of course.
Thank you! Sure, I'd be happy to have you use my loop. Let me know when you post it so I can see!
Very great melody idea. :) Can I remix this? :D
Thanks. Sure. Just please remember to give proper credit (to me), lol. Glad you like it.
I wasn't going to review this but by the looks of your score at the moment (2.85 with 3 votes) it would appear you got 0 bombed. So I guess I'll fix that for you.
I think this piece is very raw and needs expansion and variation. The backing arpeggios in the back is nice but I feel you could bring that more to the front a bit. The melody is sweet but again needs some variation besides the change at 30s.
I think you need to add some bass and maybe some atmosphere to this? Perhaps put a nice warm pad with the chords in the back?
I'd like you to continue on this because I think with some work this will be a very strong piece, obviously I'm not going to force you but I'd like to see this song completed and fleshed out to over 2 minutes.
I'm going to give this a 4/5 but I'm going to vote 5 on it to counter the 0 bomb you got.
Thanks for your review. I'm actually going for a raw sound. IMO, much of electronica is too cluttered and garbled. That being said, I'm still working on improving the sound, with some pads and strings. I will put it up when I finish.
This is great.
I think something is missing? I don't really know what.. Maybe a deep bassline at 0:28
I really like this. I'm gonna fav this. I rarely do that. You made some really great
Thanks. I tried adding a bassline, but then when it looped around, it seemed out of balance. But you're right, it still needs a lil 'something something' to make it better.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.