You should probably add a differant instrument in to make it interesting. However, its an exellent base for a song. Keep working, I know you can make it even better.
it's allright and probably perfect for some war game.. wouldn't you say this was more of a techno tune (or whatever) though? Doesn't exactly sound like general rock to me :)
you have 3 seconds!
maybe i use it to my next movie if it is okay
sure its okay if you use it, i grant you permission, but i insist that you add both good and bad guys in the mix, dispatch 1943 is very good looking, it's promising, so just work on it and youll be thanking me cuz of my kick ass tunes and advice when you get an award!