Not sure where you are going with this one, Rich.
This just seems to incohesive and incoherent to me.
It seems like you didn't spend a lot of time on this song and that it was more a track to play just for fun.
At least that's my take, it's too far off from your normal melodic style for me to like.
But it's good to see you exploring different aspects of metal playing.
This song shoulda been in Killing Floor, no cares are given as this'd fit unbelievably well. Honestly the very first few seconds gave me a feeling of the heavy metal that one of the themes have.
That's the Long and Short of how i feel, All my stars are belong to 5 of you!
Wait... I messed that up :/
Hey my friend is forcing me to do this
Check out his crap www.youtube.com/realmindzent
Sorry for the disturbance
Enjoy this awesome song
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.