I like the drama and climactic nature of this piece. I must say, however- a lot of those instruments don't sound very authentic, which I think you touched upon in the description. However, I like the structure, as well as the melodies and percussion. The ending was good, too. You also might want to transpose that violin part at 1:03 down an octave. It seemed a little too penetrating at its current pitch. Still, overall, good work. I appreciate how engaging and dramatic this piece is. ;)
Thanks for your response! When i get a hold of good instruments i will redo it and reupload. But im not sure when that will happen (maybe in a few days if im lucky, and if im not maybe in a few months if im not). About the violin, if i had proper instrument sounds it might have been different. I tried to do it one octave below but it didnt work quite well. We will see what happens when i get a hold of those libraries ;)
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