I disagree with emmafrost, the first synth that is introduced sounds good on the octave that it's on. But that bell sound that comes in a bit later could stand to be turned down a bit; that's the one that hurt my ears. Seems like you're missing your low end... I can only feel bass from the kick. This is like, a lot of high ended instruments playing similar additions of the sample melody in the same octave. This song could do with some thicker, more full sounds I thinkn. Other than the kick, the whole thing sounds a bit tinny. I like the ideas that were brought across though. Some deeper synths and this could be a pretty catchy tune :) Sweet shit.
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the start of the song should be a bit lower, hurts my ears, but cool
lol yeah i noticed that too when i used ear phones.