After that Dubstep/game music loop, I decided to look at your other work.
I like this piece. I enjoy the ambient feeling of the main synth rhythm, but the track stays the same throughout, but at least there is more than one section. I do appreciate this song a lot, and it makes me think of a futuristic apartment at night, and that shows it has good atmosphere.
I took 1.5 stars off because it is quite short and the tune stays largely the same, and I don't think the bass suits the feel too well.
Don't let those bad points fool you though. For one of your first submissions this is very good, and worthy of praise for the slow, almost house-like style.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.