I see waer u were heading with the song but it was to long and around 1:50 was getting really good but ppl would already leave this and the sound clips I say is the best part of this vid and the notes feel slopy to me but some parts of the song were really good.
I see u tryed with this but really needs inprovement
Thanks for the responce! I take criticism seriously so it's good to hear what I should be improving on.
Also, Yea, I made this song fairly quick, so there's a pretty sloppy asthetic to it. Glad you liked some parts of it, I'll try harder to keep the notes crisper.