Good song but the mixing is a little duff.
Is this for a game? I do like the use of the xylophone though.
At around 0:50, the strings need to be louder. For the most part, very amping, could be used as a battle theme. If this is meant to be a more epic piece in accordance with your description, it needs a bit more darker influence to it. Where's that "temptation?" It's poppy and strong, but not exactly dark enough to speak of a fight between brothers.
Uh. Kinda. I am not sure what it is going to be yet but it is going to be for a game or story. What you're saying makes sense. I was just trying to convey the temptation in a different way. And thanks, I play the xylophone and every other percussion instrument so I try to make really nice parts for those instruments.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.