its ok. it sound like the harmony and melody come from separate songs. the drum rhythm is nice :)
Too repetitive. The small back ground noises really do not fit with the trance.
and there rythm doesnt even fit together with or without the trance
Do you KNOW anything about music?
Judging by your spelling skills, your review is about as educated as a cow...
It was ok but compared to other things I've seen you really shouldn't judge the works of other people who rank much higher since what they make is pretty good. So then you unless what you have is comparable you shouldn't be judging.
Anyone has the right to judge anything, just because someone ranks higher than someone else, doesn't mean they're better. In my opinion, Charlie Parker is much better than Lady Gaga, but who has more fans? I am exploring an improvised type of electronic music by combining jazz (my first love) with modern sounds, I don't expect everyone to appreciate it. These are my first works, it will get more proficient and dynamic as I develop...
It is easy to pick fights on Newgrounds, I will try to be more constructive and less critical in the future.
Too repetitive , and boring like shit -_-