Wicked song. Spectacular...
Again...what a nice song man! Keep it up.
My favourite track of the 3 you just posted... reminds me a bit of Hoobastank.
Some comments... hope you won't mind:
-- The "silent screams" behind "reveal to me" and "it's eating me" doesn't help, IMO. Some harmonic vocals or even an echo-ish effect could have been better.
-- The piano coming in at 3:00 felt a bit out of place. It's too casual/soft compared to all the other elements of the song.
-- You could have packed more punch in the "Haaa---ahhhh"'s starting at 2:34 by using your "real" voice rather than your falsetto. It's a really high register but you showed you could get up there in the chorus. Just belt it out, man!
But that's just small nitpicky things, and the song overall is fantastic. I still prefer your cinematic orchestral things though :)