I like the directness of this. both of ya'll deliver the message with some decent punctuation. Mr.C's flow was very on point, but it sounded a bit forced at times; not sloppy enough, joe. Docter Brain's on some very nice imagery trips, really connects the references nice. With a dope beat, this is a sick track. Well done gents. Def a spin worthy track.
I'm liking this Doc C! Dope lyrics, message, and I like your voice in this too! Your flow was on point for the most part, but it seemed like you went a bit off beat near the end of your hook.
But yo, you are getting better and better with every track. Keep putting stuff out and you'll end up being extra fresh, because you already have the tools brutha!
Sounding better DC. Delivery is good, but you should work a bit on getting the flow to "flow" more, if you follow me. I like the grit you get in your voice, you should do that more.
DB sounds dope too. I'd like to hear more. Who's this guy?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.