Good ideas, could have been better though

Alright. I think that you could have really gotten a good sound out of this if you added some bass in there-- that's what really makes trance so pulsing. I have one suggestion that is out of my control, but I personally think that leaving the second part of the lead out would be fitting... It would sound so cool and dark if you had it stay on one scale. I really did like the one sound effect that goes... BEeeerooouwwwww! :D That was probably the most distinguishing part of the song. Otherwise it would have been pretty generic. It looks like you are on the right track, though. You just need to put more time into progression and sequencing. Keep up the good work!