Really enjoyed this track. The quality of your work is definitely impressive although some thoughts:
- The hi-hats seem a little pronounced. You could soften them a tiny bit.
- The kick seems a little punchy and flat. This isn't to say it has to be some ridiculously thick bass instead... But it just feels slightly out of place. That sort of shit is meant for extremely trashy half-hearted euro trance from the late 90's. With the vocal piece you've thrown in there, it really does seem you're trying to make this track a little "classier" than your average trance song.
- The lead and synth melody around 1:5x is fantastic, although it feels as if the supporting roll is a little hush-hush. Played this on my floor speakers and headphones (both are excellent quality) and the effect is the same.
Keep up the good work,