"Do it" by Genoti*
Comments: There was some heavy room ambiance (and someone yelling in the background) as well as loud puffs into the mic and a bit of clipping. To be honest, I'm actually surprised at myself because I actually kind of like this. In one hand I want to say this was just thrown together (obviously) and a bit lazy... but on the other hand it's an unexpected idea(?) and between the two voices other than your own, I liked the nasally one and for not being all that scripted, it all came out sounding pretty natural. Overall, I hear a lot of potential in you. What I REALLY hope is to hear you make something and take your time until you get it it to a point where you know you did the best you could. Take your time, write a good script, show off more characters, add some post production, find a better recording space and invest in a pop filter. It seems like a lot, but they are all pretty easy things to do. I hope you come back in the next contest and get something complete into it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.