hahaha

ha x 3. You win my respect for posting uselessly funny stuff like this. I pretty sure, this was not meant to sound like a work of art, so i'm not going to rate based on that.

well..

i guess since its the first song that youve submitted to new grounds i will not try to blam,but i could give a few pointerz. one thing i would have liked better would be to put less space between the words. another thing-maybe use a different instument in part of the song. more beat wouldnt hurt either.