This track is quite good, I like the low pads and the beat is nice. The thing is, its way too repetitive, and doesn't have enough action in it. The ethnic percussion is playing a really boring rhythm, any tribespeople would be rolling their eyes at it. I know you can do more with it!
Also, I was missing a bassline, those pads help fill out the low frequencies, but you need something more to provide a foundation.
You have the right idea, just amp it up a bit and break out some wicked sounds!
Thanks man, I'll listen to your advice and I'll see what I can do. Right now I am busy with many tracks, but I'll find time for this one.