"A Night to Remember" by TheCartooningMaster*
Comments: The narrator/announcer voice in the beginning really didn't fit. There's also a different way to read narrative parts from character parts. The narrator was also the same voice as "bird" (or burt?) You had some puffs into the mic, but mixing was decent overall. Sometimes stumbling over your words can work as improv, but there were a couple moments here where it didn't. Overall, work on expanding your vocal range, invest in a pop filter and take care to really get into your characters as well as being careful with script reading.
Now that's what I call constructive criticism! You can bet I'm gonna practice even more to get better in the future. And a pop filter is next on my to buy list. Thanks for the review!