your piano is really nice, also the kick needs more punch and less bass. i'm missing a clap and some hihat's also the buildup wasn't that good. also add some more background layers because it's sounding a bit empty sometimes.
although the rest is pretty awsome needs a bit more mastering etc but I'm hearing a lot of potential in this track so keep it up ;)
I did a little more mastering, I kinda lost touch for working on this too long in one sitting.
This is First build, it will build again after this :3