good start

here's some constructive criticism.. please don't be offended

that being said..

i think there should be another melody in there. like a powerful synth. maybe some pads, like strings or something.

the beat was pretty koo except a little repetitive. i wasn't diggin the claps too much.

i think you could be something big.

that melody is really good.

anyways.. i hope to hear what you could sound like to your full potential.

i2