here's some constructive criticism.. please don't be offended
that being said..
i think there should be another melody in there. like a powerful synth. maybe some pads, like strings or something.
the beat was pretty koo except a little repetitive. i wasn't diggin the claps too much.
i think you could be something big.
that melody is really good.
anyways.. i hope to hear what you could sound like to your full potential.