A little more progress than the original had..slowly coming along.
nice
i agree with the guy below.. that pause was a little long..
i think you could really make this into a hit on ng. seriously!
add some reveerb or delay on the synth.. some effects.. and make the beat more diverse.. n you got it!
i loved the piano by the way.
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I liked it
It was good, i think the only thing wrong, is the pause in the middle, i thought i was just like 2 secs too long, but other than that it was really good. ^-^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
XDragonslayerX 
