I like it..
My main complaint about this peice is the audio quality, as I can hear it almost breaking down completely. Did you record this with a crappy mic? It would seem that way... The timing is way off on some of the instruments, including what sounds like a keyboard you were playing. The tune sounds great minus these two big problems. If you could get the timing fixed, and the audio quality better, I think this song would be a great ambient tune.
Keep up the good work.