Needs better pattern and rythym...
Nice use of fx at the start :D but it should cut out once it breaks into it... it ruins the song since it keeps on going, and it would be nice to hear some bass? i didnt notice any, but it kud of been therer jst not loud enuth on the low range or mid range...
the pattern is quite repetitive... and the song doesnt seem to go anywhere except for the intro and wats seems a verse, and unfortunately becus of this it doesnt rly make me want to dance either :( oh and make sure if u do use fx... that it keeps going, at 1:28 and 2:07 it cuts out for a second so suggestively it should of stopped ages ago
also it would nice to hear a pattern that backs up the main pattern... and stronger drums
so altogether this song unfortunately cud use a bit of work and to me, atleast there is effort here, is only worth 5/10 and a 2/5
Alright, well thank you for being honest. However, I had LOTS of base, almost to the point where the music was distorted (Oops), and I intended for the pattern to be recurring. But I do see where the rain stops and that does need work as you said. Yet, with that said, I dont think its deserving of a 2/5 or even a 5/10. Anyways, thanks for the honesty and hopefully I can work on these things in the future.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.