It would seem this is just a work in progress so far. It definitely needs to be louder when you're done with it.
That said, I like the juxtaposition of the distorted synth with the piano melody near the end.
There's also a lead line that comes in at about 1:15, and I think if you simplified it (each note once instead of some twice, I think as sustained 8th notes instead 16th notes), you'd get more punch from a pace change/slight dynamic shift. That hook may also sound better on a piano voice.
These are all suggestions though, save for the comment about the volume. Definitely make it louder.