Thank God you're not a rapist. You could get in jail being one! (the term for someone who raps is a rapper)
- The beat in the intro is nice.
- That synth is way too loud. Try adding distortion rather than just increasing the volume.
- The melody at 1:44 is nice.
- I'm hearing a lot of ducking (the snare, notably) and clipping (the synths) in this track. Basically what that means is that your synths are loud. Very loud. Too loud. You get my point.
The track has a nice vibe, but you've got a lot of mixing problems.
story of my life.
That synth that comes in at 0:11 is really cool! I can totally see a rapper going over that beat
I really like the grooviness of the track. But it kind of seems a bit too repetitive...you used the same riff for a minute. But, if this was made for a rapper, then youre 100% fine with it
WAIT 1:44 THATS SO COOL