Sorry I reviewed the wrong song, This review should be for "Death Kill Violence" and the review for "Death kill Violnce is for "Greek God Intro".
Anyways about "Death Kill Violence", it sounds like all you have done is imported a midi file of a song into a slayer and just submitted that, with no effects on anything. You may not have done this but it sure sounds like it.
You have to use more that just the Slayer for your songs, and your gunna have to tweak the slayer aswell to make it sound better.
Hope you do well