I like the ominous, simple, and climactic beginning. The lyrics proved a good transition. This is catchy and funky. I love the instruments and transitions. I like the breakdown at 1:18, too. The ending is a little sudden, but it could possibly make a good loop. At some points in the song, it lacked substance, and the vocals as they are now didn't really seem to lead anywhere, but I understand that you're working on that. ;) Overall, good job. I like your style, Dracnum. :D
Hey thanks, Bro! its not often that i get good constructive feedback. I'm actually regretting making the beginning they way i did. usually if a song doesn't pick up within the first five seconds people just move on, but i'm glad you liked it. Finding someone who can decently sing/rap and has recording equipment is also a pain, but hopefully someone on NG will get bored and give it a shot haha.
Thanks again, dude. you really seem to know your music ;)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.