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Universal (Acoustic)

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Recorded this and did slight leveling, but this is in one full take minus the one part I added. Updated as of 5/14/13 May have to kill cookies.

Stand up, Okay
I'll be the one to guide you

One day, We'll be
some place that holds a value

Step back, Full View
A sea of salts no use to you

Fall down, Rescue
This Life you'll answer to

And I'm trying to get out
I'm trying to get in
I'm trying to be Universal

I'm Fighting to get by
Fighting not to cave in
I'm trying to be educated

Stand down, Okay
These guns are all out of view

Sunday, We'll rest
A case that we'll plead guilty to

Fall back, No View
A sea of salt wont heal my wounds

Fall Down Rescue
This life you'll answer to

And I'm trying to get out
I'm trying to get in
I'm trying to be Universal

I'm trying to get by
Fighting not to cave in
I'm trying to be educated

We'll do what we want, And we'll do what need
And we don't need their damn approval

Just listen to me, I want you to succeed
But with out you I fail.

I'm still trying to get in....

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hey man
good song its one i've find myself coming back to quite a few times now
its got a really nice pop punk feel to it
id like to hear an electric version of this but a part of me feels like it would take away the integrity of the song because it has a lot of character as an acoustic piece and you have quite a soft spoken voice and i think that contributes to the general acoustic niceness too
is that a second guitar i hear at about one minute in?
if this is recorded on a multitrack i'd put some compression on that and maybe turn the high end of the eq up because it kind of gets lost in the bass end of your rhythm guitar
i like the kind of half talking line at about three minutes inits very Jarvis cocker and thats hard to pull of without sounding like a dick and you've done it so well done haha

Karmakosm responds:

Wow. I appreciate the review a whole ton. Feel free to download it and see if you can spot the difference! I was considering an electronic version when I'm not just recording in my bedroom, but probably not for a while.

Well... I usually do not listen to any genre in Newgrounds, but Video Game songs... But I wanted to take a look to your material, and dude, you're awesome!
You really put me into a very nice mood tonight... I like your style. For sure, you got my thumbs up!
Keep the good work!

you're awesome!

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Karmakosm
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Apr 11, 2013
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3 min 40 sec
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