Pretty good man, for your first attempt. It sounds like the music for a video game or movie menu. Very happy and upbeat melody as well. Awesome
You seem to grasp the basics, but it's kinda hard to give any input not knowing what kind of house you're trying to make. Listening to this I feel the bass could be worked upon, play around with it more because right now it sounds kinda old. The melody works well but it feels a bit more like a trance melody than house. Great sounding percussions, nothing to complain about there.
Overall I think it sounds a bit empty, playing around with the bassline, adding more hi-hats and a snare drum/clap to create a flowing beat might solve the issue.
Keep it up!
If you want to make it better make it more awesome and maybe a little faster. :D
I is good review <3
Good! I loved the beat!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.