as you said later on it got pretty neat, but I don't think you should have people wait that long before anything of significance happens you know what I mean?
For sure, cut up that intro, make it shorter.
I didn't hear any pads, do consider one or two, for some background noise.
Interesting stuff Edski, keep them coming man. 4/5 from me.
thanks for your review, ill remember it to use pads xD