Very good, you seem to have put a bit of work into this. It sounds very clean.
The instrument that begins at 0:28 needs to be compressed, or EQed so it either isn't as loud, or isn't as high. I may have a bias against treble, so you may want a second opinion on that. On second thought I am already EQing it, so it should be replaced or compressed.
Cool song man i really enjoyed it. The breakdowns and sweep transitions were well placed within the mix. A couple small pointers, the main melody too me could be dropped a few decibels i thought it was masking a much of the rest of the instruments. Maybe bring up the snare a bit i thought it could use some punch same with the hi hats could be a tad louder. Other than that i enjoyed it, well done.
Thanks for the tips! I appreciate it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.