Great job.
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Rushing Waters.
Rush.
Stargenx responds:
Thanks for the review! You are review #400. (Not a joke).
Congratulations! You win no prizes, but it is cool.
For some reason nothing showed up in my feed in the last 2 days, so I never got notified of your two new songs. (But your new news post came through.) I guess this also explains the low # of listens.
As usual, your keyboard work is great, and overall gets the vibe across. But I thought the choir sounded out of place -- the "female" voice is too piercing, and the "male" voice was borderline haunting... which killed the scenery quite a bit.
Also, I thought the piano at 2:24 and 2:29 was too casual. It's fine to go off rhythm a little bit, but that was a bit too loose for my liking. Persconally I'd rather you closed it in a more grand, decisive way.
Just my 2 cents.
Stargenx responds:
Thanks for the review! I understand your feelings of doubt about the voices, and I have decided to work on them. In response to your comment about the ending; I tend to end songs humbly more often than not to sort of 'rest' from the strict meter that the rest of the song follows. That said, I'll keep it in mind and apply the feedback to further songs.
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