"Ngvac Antr, Radio Show" by KeepYourDistance*

******MOST ORIGINAL*******

Acting- 42/50
Range- 23/25
Fit- 20/25
Mixing- 14/20
Originality- 15/15
Writing- 14/15
TOTAL- 128/150

Comments: There was some dead air and background noise from the computer. There was also minor reverb from the room. The stereo balance was off a bit. I would have chosen a slightly different voice for the DJ; it just didn't sit right with me. I really liked Gilbert (Godfrey?). Dj should have been more smooth in transitions like an actual DJ. Some of his lines sounded a bit like awkward improv. I would have used a phone hang up effect instead of the static. Bane's voice wasn't too bad, but not as powerful as it should have been. DJ's voice changed at beginning of burglar call. Burglar 1 was good. I could hear a potentially excellent mad scientist voice in you. Not a bad skit over all and it was a really good idea. Overall, there are several small things that you could fix, but once those are made better, I think you could be a great talent.